好吧~她讲的很好~给你说说,正好当复习了~
第一题写作,首先我们学生最常犯的毛病就是老用那几个老词,比如now,become,people,and\but等等,老师整天看这些词,早就烦了,所以要换一些新鲜的词。这些词不难,就是平时不注意。常见词如下:
1,nowadays,换为presently,soo far,by now,currently等
2,讲什么现象,要会说。如果现象是个很长的词组、句子,换成That引导的主语从句。
3,变得怎么样,比如become 换成turn\appear\emerge,more and more...换成a growing number of.例,more and more people=an increasing number of people.
popular也很常见,换成widespread,common,prevalent
严重serious=severe and intence,sharp
4,人、人民、人类。people换成human beings ,folks(老百姓)
许多many=a sea of,an ocean of,a large number\amount of,a host of...
5,有时候说道,“一些人认为,另一些认为”。
think=consider,feel,maintain,note.
some people think A,but others have a different opinion on this topic
=there is no consensus of opinion among people as to the view of...
6,认为,见5
7,and,but的替换。and=as while as,besides,more over,in addition
but=while ,yet,rather than,instead of nevertheless
8.make=enable,boost(促进),drive(驱使)
9.very=pretty,rather,exceedingly
10,for example=such as,for instance. to cite a concrete case(引用一个恰当的例子)
11,happen=occur,take place,emerge,show up(用于活物)
12, pay attention to换为bring into focus
13, according to=on the basis of,on the ground of,in line of