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One day I was eating my breakfast, one stranger came to punch my face 这个句子是否有错误
IP属地:美国1楼2011-10-10 04:42回复
    I was eating my breakfast one day
    One day when I was eating my breakfast
    One day, (when) I was eating my breakfast
    a stranger比one stranger要好一些
    came to punch没错，不过估计你要表达的意思是came and punched
    IP属地:山东2楼2011-10-10 06:54
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      One day,when I was eating my breakfast,a stranger suddenly came and gave a punch on my face.
      貌似我的总是话很多=v=
      IP属地:广东3楼2011-10-10 09:11
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        正确的句子。
        IP属地:广东4楼2011-10-10 10:14
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          我擦　楼上
          IP属地:浙江来自掌上百度5楼2011-10-10 10:22
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            可以说one day, i was eating my breakfast when a stranger.....
            来自掌上百度6楼2011-10-10 12:29
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              One day I was eating my breakfast, one stranger came to punch my face
              多谓语了，要改成并列句或复合句。比较常见的说法是 One day I was eating my breakfast, when one stranger came to punch my face.
              另外，came to punch 语法上没问题，表意上似乎不如 came and punched。
              IP属地:辽宁7楼2011-10-10 20:07
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                两个句子之间应该有个连词吧。。。
                或者你用中间用句号 别用逗号
                我的高中老师是这样教导我的
                IP属地:浙江8楼2011-10-10 21:03
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