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Wall Street is a famous street in the New York.Itgot its name of the wooden wall that used to stand where the street now runs.The wall were built in the 1600s. New York was them a Dutch city set upby people come from Holland in Europe. It was called New Amsterdam.


1楼2011-10-20 17:03回复
    The America Indians were not always friends of the Dutch,so were the English. So the Dutch built the wall in order that protect their town. The wall is good,but WallStreet reminds the people in New York the Dutch who settle down there. It is the center of banking and finance.


    来自手机贴吧2楼2011-10-20 17:03
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      by people coming from Holland in Europe 吧


      3楼2011-10-20 17:13
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        So the Dutch built the wall in order to protect their town.The wall is good,but Wall Street reminds the people in New York of Dutch who settled down there. It is the center of banking and finance.


        4楼2011-10-20 17:15
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          应该差不多了


          5楼2011-10-20 17:15
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            能全部修改下吗?谢谢!@种树2


            来自手机贴吧6楼2011-10-20 17:15
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              It got its name from the wooden wall that used to stand here.我觉得here可以代指了,后面的冗长了,还有用name after比较好,我觉得


              7楼2011-10-20 17:17
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                还有至少三处错。@种树2


                来自手机贴吧8楼2011-10-20 17:22
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