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【改写】but you didn't (短小掉落)

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源自微博的一篇:一对美国母女相依为命,父亲在越战中丧生。母亲终身没有再嫁。女儿在整理母亲遗物时,发现了一首母亲写的诗,题目叫but you didn't。语言平实无奇,却感人至深。
看完觉得很感动,所以也模仿写了一篇尊哥角度的。感谢@July£舞月 亲切的配了英文版~


1楼2013-04-29 12:12回复
    Remember the time you were beat by some bad guys and be in hospital, i didn't go to see you deliberately?I thought you'd feel sad and leave me immediately, but you didn't.
    记得有一次,你被小混混揍到住院,我故意没有去看你
    我以为你会死心离开我
    但是你没有
    Remember the time you invited me to watch fireworks of the fiesta, i just said get out to you with impatience?I thought you'd get angry and sick of me ,but you didn't.
    记得有一次,你邀请我去看祭典的烟花,我烦躁地说滚开
    我以为你会生气讨厌我
    但是你没有
    Remember the time when i out of control,i almost got you wrist fractured?I thought you'd fear me ,but you didn't.
    记得有一次,我控制不住力量差点让你的手腕骨折
    我以为你会害怕我
    但是你没有
    And do you remember the time i broke your favourite camera which filled with memories ?I thought you'd blame me,but you didn't.
    记得有一次,我弄坏了你最珍爱的充满回忆的相机
    我以为你会责怪我
    但是你没有
    There were lots of things you didn't do,and i never understood what you were thinking about, you just looked at me with a gentle smile always.And there was an important thing i meant to tell you after Anna's birthday.But you didn't wait for me.
    很多事你都没有做,我也从来没有猜到过你的想法,你只是微笑看着我
    有件重要的事情还没有告诉你,我想等安娜过完生日就告诉你
    但是你没有等我
    END


    2楼2013-04-29 12:15
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      3楼2013-04-29 12:42
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        Q口Q


        IP属地:广东4楼2013-04-29 13:47
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          过完安娜的生日就跟他表白吧,周防在心里这样想着。
          因为时间都用来打架和睡觉了,所以第三王权者完全不知道他已经亲手把flag立的高高高高的了orz
          #论看番的重要性#


          来自手机贴吧5楼2013-04-29 15:09
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            每看一遍都被全方位捅穿呢……尊哥视角真是QAQ


            IP属地:上海7楼2013-04-29 19:08
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              已经没有地方再插刀了....尊哥视角很少的撒。不过好有爱


              来自手机贴吧8楼2013-04-30 00:28
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                唉唉。不能更虐


                来自手机贴吧9楼2013-04-30 11:21
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                  11楼2013-05-01 05:26
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                    真的没地方插刀了......


                    IP属地:湖北来自手机贴吧12楼2013-05-01 06:12
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                      楼主!好巧啊啊啊!我晚自习看得英语美文的杂志上正好有那个原稿!我当时就想这个很适合尊多!楼主就写了!!


                      来自手机贴吧13楼2013-05-01 21:22
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                        又捅刀


                        15楼2013-05-03 06:30
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