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我等你的盛绽,
等了一夜,一夜的雪。
若你不想理会,
又何必,何必夺走我的衷心?
想那一夜的苍凉满腹,
可知,湿濡了我围巾的雪花
又有多少温度?
这样一来,
你便只是遥远的梦境,
遥远到我再难看见你花瓣的浅樱。

那时,你从不肯和我说话,
沿着沉默行走的节奏,
夺走你本应芬芳的吐息。
为何,为何你会如此木讷,
缪斯的画笔却给你比天空更柔和的色泽。

烧灼吧,我的心,
摆脱缪斯的颜色留下的幻影。
你这薄情的妖精,
乘着温柔的南风而来,却带着我的思念而走,
好啊,这下一来,
我便造梦也难以忘却,
一树的绮梦,
一树不为我开绽的残樱。
[CHERRY BLOSSOM]


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来自iPhone客户端1楼2015-05-12 09:18


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    来自Android客户端2楼2015-05-12 09:23
      小新人果然沉贴


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      来自iPhone客户端3楼2015-05-12 09:41


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        来自Android客户端4楼2015-05-12 17:02
          我觉得乘着温柔的南风而来,却带着我的思念而走中的走改为去好一些,不喜勿怪啊!


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          来自Android客户端5楼2015-05-15 09:31
            好啊改为好吧!可以为下面无奈的语气做铺垫。你试试看


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            来自Android客户端6楼2015-05-15 09:35
              好棒好棒!


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              来自Android客户端8楼2015-05-15 11:15

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                来自Android客户端9楼2015-05-15 11:28


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                  来自Android客户端10楼2015-05-15 11:35
                    @仰望残樱 快看标题


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                    来自Android客户端11楼2015-05-15 20:31