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原文: 我认为追求美是每个人的权利与天性,而且与其他众多的帅哥共同选美可以增加我的信心。选美开阔我视野的同时也使我增加了关于如何提升人形体美的知识。在舞台上的临场发挥更能助长我的胆识,此外在于别人竞争的过程中可以提高我的应变力还能学到与他人相处的方法。
译文: I think the pursuit of beauty is everyone's right and nature, and many other handsome boy beauty together can increase my confidence. Beauty broaden my horizons but also make me increase the knowledge about how to improve people physical beauty. On the stage of improvisation can encourage me more courage, in addition is that others in the process of the competition can improve the resilience of I also can learn to get along with others.
希望大家给点建议,如何更好,谢谢大家!


来自Android客户端1楼2015-10-20 21:23回复
    没人吗?


    来自Android客户端2楼2015-10-20 21:29
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      来自Android客户端3楼2015-10-20 21:31
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        来自Android客户端4楼2015-10-20 21:32
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          中式英语 别扭


          5楼2015-10-20 21:42
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            咋改?


            来自Android客户端6楼2015-10-20 21:53
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              I think the pursuit of beauty is everyone's right and nature, but also with many other beauty of the common beauty can increase my confidence. The beauty of the beauty of the eyes, but also to increase the knowledge of how to enhance the beauty of the human body. On the stage of spot to play more to encourage my courage and insight, in addition is compete with others can improve my stress and strain can learn to get along with others.


              7楼2015-10-20 22:16
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                谢谢!


                来自Android客户端8楼2015-10-20 22:58
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                  I believe that beauty lies in our desire and the right to pursue it.competing to upstage other sexy models goes a long way towards my confidence.what is more, it will be an eye opener,as well as showing me a thing or two about getting in shape.I can shake off stage fright in alibi,and ultimately,learn some tactful lesson and quick responses combined


                  来自Android客户端9楼2015-10-21 00:06
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                    谢谢!


                    来自Android客户端10楼2015-10-21 09:37
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                      IP属地:北京11楼2015-10-21 09:40
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