I tried my best to translate. Somewhere I had to change the words just expressing the meaning, or my poor English will not be able to express accurately.
Without notes edition:
After the clouds above Mountain Wu go away,
Darkness and sadness are holden in palms.
After a sea becomes a land and a land becomes a sea,
How to forget the fallen green?
If neither you nor I know about separation,
Can we love each other frankly?
There is not enough time for the dreamer to wake up
to know his swear.
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
in the ten years.
If you never lose anything,
How can you spend your whole life understanding how precious it is!
After the clouds above Mountain Wu go away,
Darkness and sadness are holden in palms.
After a sea becomes a land and a land becomes a sea,
How to forget the fallen green?
If neither you nor I know about separation,
Can we love each other frankly?
There is not enough time for the dreamer to wake up
to know his swear.
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
in the ten years.
If you never lose anything,
How can you use your whole life to love!
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
making me wait you for my whole life.
If I never lose anything,
will everything change from the beginning?
With Notes Edition:
After the clouds above Mountain Wu go away,(clouds and Mountain Wu is associated with love in Chinise traditional culture)
Darkness and sadness are holden in palms.(which means that the person is so sorrowful and woeful)
After a sea becomes a land and a land becomes a sea,(which means that so much time has passed away)
How to forget the fallen green?("Green" here means the girl Yao whose last name in Chinese means green."Fallen" is because she used a magic which sacrificed herself to stop the big sword flying to her lover and then she fell from the sky. So sometimes we use "Fallen Green" to mention her. )
If neither you nor I know about separation,
Can we love each other frankly?(It's hard to express this feeling, hope that you can understand!)
There is not enough time for the dreamer to wake up
to know his swear.(When Fan told Yao that he loved her, Yao's souls had gone away. She was sleeping forever and couldn't hear that any more.)
You used to have bright eyes with kindness(Fan used to be innocent and kindhearted. But after Yao died for him, he changed.)
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive whithout regreting,(She sacrificed all she owned to save him)
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping("You" means "Yao", "sleeping" is because her souls have gone away, she can't wake up unless her souls are collected and put into her body)
in the ten years(Fan spent ten years trying to find a way to make her relive)
If you never lose anything,
How can you spend your whole life understanding how precious it is!
After the clouds above Mountain Wu go away,
Darkness and sadness are holden in palms.
After a sea becomes a land and a land becomes a sea,
How to forget the fallen green?
If neither you nor I know about separation,
Can we love each other frankly?
There is not enough time for the dreamer to wake up
to know his swear.
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
in the ten years.
If you never lose anything,
How can you use your whole life to love!
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
making me wait you for my whole life.
If I never lose anything,
will everything change from the beginning?
By the way, 13 years after this novel was published, the writer Ding Xiao wrote another book called <<Luxian>> which is associated with <<Zhuxian>>. In <<Luxian>>, Fan succeded to bring Yao back to life.
Without notes edition:
After the clouds above Mountain Wu go away,
Darkness and sadness are holden in palms.
After a sea becomes a land and a land becomes a sea,
How to forget the fallen green?
If neither you nor I know about separation,
Can we love each other frankly?
There is not enough time for the dreamer to wake up
to know his swear.
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
in the ten years.
If you never lose anything,
How can you spend your whole life understanding how precious it is!
After the clouds above Mountain Wu go away,
Darkness and sadness are holden in palms.
After a sea becomes a land and a land becomes a sea,
How to forget the fallen green?
If neither you nor I know about separation,
Can we love each other frankly?
There is not enough time for the dreamer to wake up
to know his swear.
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
in the ten years.
If you never lose anything,
How can you use your whole life to love!
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
making me wait you for my whole life.
If I never lose anything,
will everything change from the beginning?
With Notes Edition:
After the clouds above Mountain Wu go away,(clouds and Mountain Wu is associated with love in Chinise traditional culture)
Darkness and sadness are holden in palms.(which means that the person is so sorrowful and woeful)
After a sea becomes a land and a land becomes a sea,(which means that so much time has passed away)
How to forget the fallen green?("Green" here means the girl Yao whose last name in Chinese means green."Fallen" is because she used a magic which sacrificed herself to stop the big sword flying to her lover and then she fell from the sky. So sometimes we use "Fallen Green" to mention her. )
If neither you nor I know about separation,
Can we love each other frankly?(It's hard to express this feeling, hope that you can understand!)
There is not enough time for the dreamer to wake up
to know his swear.(When Fan told Yao that he loved her, Yao's souls had gone away. She was sleeping forever and couldn't hear that any more.)
You used to have bright eyes with kindness(Fan used to be innocent and kindhearted. But after Yao died for him, he changed.)
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive whithout regreting,(She sacrificed all she owned to save him)
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping("You" means "Yao", "sleeping" is because her souls have gone away, she can't wake up unless her souls are collected and put into her body)
in the ten years(Fan spent ten years trying to find a way to make her relive)
If you never lose anything,
How can you spend your whole life understanding how precious it is!
After the clouds above Mountain Wu go away,
Darkness and sadness are holden in palms.
After a sea becomes a land and a land becomes a sea,
How to forget the fallen green?
If neither you nor I know about separation,
Can we love each other frankly?
There is not enough time for the dreamer to wake up
to know his swear.
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
in the ten years.
If you never lose anything,
How can you use your whole life to love!
You used to have bright eyes with kindness
seeing how the world crucious and people can't hold their destiny.
Dispending all souls, closing eyes, caring nothing about being alive without regreting,
Your face is the same all the time when you are sleeping
making me wait you for my whole life.
If I never lose anything,
will everything change from the beginning?
By the way, 13 years after this novel was published, the writer Ding Xiao wrote another book called <<Luxian>> which is associated with <<Zhuxian>>. In <<Luxian>>, Fan succeded to bring Yao back to life.
