许多研究表明电脑分散了人的注意力，使人们成了思想懒惰者，降低了他们的工作效率。
你可以从电脑给人们带来的副作用出发阐述。

最讨厌这种像辩论题一样的作文了

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可以先写出来

Is technology making people lazy?
With the rapid development of technology and society, the issue of whether technology is making people lazy has been in the limelight. What convinces my perspective is that technology is making people lazy in many aspects of life.
It is quite a few factors that could account for my argument. The primary reason is that the widespread use of smart phones that are available for everyone allows people to know what is happening outside without having to go out whenever they need. In addition, previously people would have to walked a long way to the shops or supermarkets if they want to purchase commodities. On the contrary, nowadays, they just need to open the shopping application on their smart phones and simply click to order the goods they want.
In a word, the improvement of technology brings so much convenience to people's lives but it also makes them lazy. so, youngsters should be encouraged to have a positive attitude towards their lives instead of sitting on the sofa,being given the answers to everything immediately. Only in this way can technology serve people appropriately and reasonably.
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