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准备把原神启动的邮件发给39了,考虑到不是骂他的,我觉得应该尽量写的清楚详细一点,请大家帮忙一起出出主意改一改,有条件可以一起发一发最终的版本
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Let’s PROTOTYPE, GO!


IP属地:河北来自iPhone客户端1楼2024-04-25 15:44回复
    Dear sir:
    I’m a Chinese player, and I’m think of a advice for the Kards game. Thank you for reading this. I think it is a mutual benefit advice for you and many players who are from China.
    As we all know, Germany has a 6k cards called “jet prototype” . It is not only very popular but also can be used in many decks. And I believe you have known that there are also a games called “Ginshin impact” which made from China is very popular. It’s also promote many catchwords. And one of the most popular is called “Yuanshen Qidong”. Maybe it can translate like a sentence called “Ginshin impact, Go!”. And many Chinese players give the “jet prototype” a new name which we called “Ginshin plane”. May be is the Chinese translate “YuanXingJi” seems like “YuanShen”. And then, when we use that plane, we may say “Yuanshen Qidong” either. So I advise to add a new phrase like that. Considering of the copyright, I think “Prototype, Go!” is a good choice for you to add it in. And if you need a Chinese translate advise. I think “原型机,启动!” is a good choice to use.
    Add this phrase won’t have any risk and it will take much input for you from that. Chinese players will glad to pay for it and other countries players also won’t resist it. Why not do it?Let’s PROTOTYPE GO!


    IP属地:河北来自iPhone客户端2楼2024-04-25 15:45
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      落款没写,是为了方便大家填自己的


      IP属地:河北来自iPhone客户端3楼2024-04-25 15:45
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        啊,感觉应该再加一句我听说中国玩家在Kards游戏有一定的占比,大概写作“I heard the Chinese players aren’t the tiny minority players”?


        IP属地:河北来自iPhone客户端5楼2024-04-25 15:50
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          邮件开头可以是 Dear sir/madam,或者to whom it may concern
          然后有一些类似a 6k cards的小语法错误,还有就是有些地方虽然说不上来错但是读起来有点怪,感觉可以用翻译软件过一下?当然其实他们也能看懂,也无所谓


          IP属地:黑龙江来自iPhone客户端6楼2024-04-25 16:59
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            差不多得了,抱着个烂梗不放


            IP属地:黑龙江来自Android客户端7楼2024-04-25 17:04
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              IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端8楼2024-04-25 17:10
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                IP属地:山东来自Android客户端9楼2024-04-25 17:12
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                  发出去纯给中国玩家招黑,建议别发


                  IP属地:英国来自iPhone客户端10楼2024-04-25 17:14
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                    你这写的语法拼写问题挺多啊


                    IP属地:英国来自iPhone客户端11楼2024-04-25 17:26
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                      IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端12楼2024-04-25 17:38
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                        玩原神玩的逆天


                        IP属地:广东来自Android客户端13楼2024-04-25 17:57
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                          什么原神启动?原型机没必要增强了


                          IP属地:浙江来自Android客户端14楼2024-04-25 18:30
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                            不至于真不至于,卡兹还真不至于蹭这些流量


                            IP属地:广东来自Android客户端15楼2024-04-25 18:41
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                              非常感谢您宝贵的意见,但我们很关注游戏的中国市场,因此我们暂时不会在游戏里添加这些内容。


                              IP属地:吉林来自Android客户端16楼2024-04-25 18:51
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